[His hair does deserve that kind of attention, yes, but this is poetry and one must be more delicate in poetry than in
purple prose
so please be serious!! Does he know? Does he? He gives her a skeptical look, finely arched eyebrow and all, but these are some very nice and accurate adjectives...]
Could we not put "purple" somewhere else in the verse? Or you could stop insisting that it must rhyme.
i think it's at least 2 cornerstones
purple prose
so please be serious!! Does he know? Does he? He gives her a skeptical look, finely arched eyebrow and all, but these are some very nice and accurate adjectives...]
Could we not put "purple" somewhere else in the verse? Or you could stop insisting that it must rhyme.
[But thanks, he is all of those things!!]